Rimotar had never been so scared
in his life before. A biting beak of death was only feet away from
him, ready to snatch him away even if he relaxed for a second. To
make things worse the egg he had stolen was definitely hatching.
Another part of the egg shell fell
away. Rimotar inched forward with one eye on the mother griffin that
appeared to be resting just outside his rock overhang. He peered
within, a small front paw shot out and scratched his face quite
badly.
“Ah!” he shouted. He was bleeding
from three places now.
The tiny griffin busted out of the rest
of the shell. It snapped its jaw and scratched at the ground,
squealing as it did so.
“Shh!” hissed Rimotar with his
finger on his lips. It was of little use, the mother was shifting her
weight to have a look.
Scrambling, Rimotar had only one
option, he covered himself in the gooey remnants of the egg. The
mother looked in with her big head, the baby griffin crawled out.
Rimotar followed suit. Hoping the covering would disguise him as one
of her own.
The mother griffin sniffed the baby
griffin, satisfied it nuzzled its head against it, crooning as she
did so. Next she went up to the slowly moving away Rimotar. Rimotar
paused. She sniffed him and then looked at him with its big eyes.
This was it, Rimotar's mother would discover his mutilated body later
and that will be end of him. The griffin moved in closer and rubbed
her head against him. Rimotar found it oddly comforting.
Rimotar wondered if she didn't see him
as a threat anymore or that she wanted him as a snack for her young
ones. The thought made Rimotar shiver in dread. The baby griffin came
over and yapped at her feet. Squawking she grabbed them both and took
them up to the nest, just in time to see that the other eggs were
hatching too.
Rimotar edged away, trying to escape,
but she was a sharp one and pulled him back. For almost a day Rimotar
suffered many more scratches and bites and having to eat raw meat
because the mother griffin was expecting him too was not something he
wanted to relive.
Then the next morning one of the babies
leaped for freedom, and the mother went after it. Seeing his chance
Rimotar went for it. The other two squawked in protest, but their
mother was too far away to hear.
Exhausted from the climb up the cliff
face Rimotar collapsed under a bush for shelter. For the next couple
of hours Rimotar caught bits of sleep as the mother griffin came
searching for him minutes at a time. She didn't want to leave her
young ones alone for too long.
After an hour of stumbling and resting
Rimotar eventually crashed through the kitchen door of his family
home.
“Rimotar! My baby!”
“I love you mum.”
She hugged him tight. “You are never
leaving the house again!”
“I don't plan to.”
“And mom, it's true, I can use
magic.”
“Your father won't be pleased.”
“I know.”
Hi Craig -- Rimotar's eggscape was very fortuitous indeed. Loved the ending. Small typo half way through when he is being made to eat that raw meat -- should be 'to' instead of 'too' maybe? And his name does scream magic. Good dose of fantasy to start off my Saturday - thanks.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Was a bit unsure about the ending. Glad it worked though :). He has been one of my favorite characters for a while and it's good to explore his childhood. And thanks will fix that right up.
DeleteNow wasn't Rimotar the mage in your novels? A little story about how he set out on the magical path? Smart idea, just lay low and pretend to be a griffin baby until he had a chance to escape! This was fun!
ReplyDeleteSure is Larry! Exactly, and I'm sure it's the sort of story Tennen would like to hear. He would be happy to see Rimotar is and still can be quite the risk taker :).
DeleteI said last week that griffins don't make good pets, they do however make very good mothers...
ReplyDeleteIf you are a baby griffin that is. :)
I don't know if you can ground young magicians, but they should look into it.
ReplyDeleteWell, Rimotar may be grounded, but he can use magic!
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