tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post3886638561284791252..comments2023-09-30T05:41:35.801-07:00Comments on The Fantasy/Reality World of a Writer: Fifty Seventh Friday Flash: The Prince and the FrogCraig Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-77197717586577242392012-06-12T13:31:02.067-07:002012-06-12T13:31:02.067-07:00Thanks Richard! The latter might lead to a lot of ...Thanks Richard! The latter might lead to a lot of warts, but you never know unless you try ;).Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-8675029638746726712012-06-12T13:29:40.293-07:002012-06-12T13:29:40.293-07:00Thank you Larry!
And you do mean they should play...Thank you Larry!<br /><br />And you do mean they should play a game of leap frog, right? :P.Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-2252079580352402302012-06-12T13:09:34.083-07:002012-06-12T13:09:34.083-07:00I broke out laughing at the end — "Ribbit!&qu...I broke out laughing at the end — "Ribbit!" maybe he should just jump her? 8-}Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-39556305519190080672012-06-10T18:12:41.888-07:002012-06-10T18:12:41.888-07:00Ah, the pond, perfect place to pick up beautiful w...Ah, the pond, perfect place to pick up beautiful women. I suppose we just need to keep an open mind and either listen for when a frog makes her choice, or just kiss as many random fly eaters as necessary. Cute story.liminalfictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08762010680878316253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-74982904474379084652012-06-10T05:59:54.620-07:002012-06-10T05:59:54.620-07:00Thank you Sonia!Thank you Sonia!Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-47656381154162573482012-06-10T05:57:36.665-07:002012-06-10T05:57:36.665-07:00One that may quickly turn into a nightmare.
Thank...One that may quickly turn into a nightmare.<br /><br />Thanks! Haha yup no place like home. <br /><br />I see you're in the UK at the moment?Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-9988848082795970782012-06-10T05:48:24.606-07:002012-06-10T05:48:24.606-07:00Makes me cringe just thinking about it. Thanks, Jo...Makes me cringe just thinking about it. Thanks, John!Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-1249883898127014812012-06-10T05:06:59.977-07:002012-06-10T05:06:59.977-07:00I hop so too Steve :DI hop so too Steve :DCraig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-37778931696142032842012-06-10T05:06:10.211-07:002012-06-10T05:06:10.211-07:00I agree. Imagine if we lived in a world where wish...I agree. Imagine if we lived in a world where wishes came true. Would be quite chaotic :P.Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-29515297336093070772012-06-10T05:01:08.057-07:002012-06-10T05:01:08.057-07:00I think so Jen. Definitely going to give him a lot...I think so Jen. Definitely going to give him a lot to think about when wakes up the next day with a vicious hangover...Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-32332944032928736982012-06-10T04:59:35.267-07:002012-06-10T04:59:35.267-07:00Thank you Aidan!Thank you Aidan!Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-36515703508492781302012-06-09T11:36:28.122-07:002012-06-09T11:36:28.122-07:00lol cute take on the story!lol cute take on the story!Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-3941497775469103412012-06-09T11:33:50.342-07:002012-06-09T11:33:50.342-07:00Heh-heh. Dream date.
By the way, love the barbed...Heh-heh. Dream date.<br /><br />By the way, love the barbed wire on your photo. Reminds me of home.<br /><br />Robert<br />(Ook van die Kaap)Gerry Hatrićhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06172504526073441190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-86992092137995643012012-06-09T10:15:42.227-07:002012-06-09T10:15:42.227-07:00It would be so bad to enjoy flies. Knew this would...It would be so bad to enjoy flies. Knew this would work out well after "handsomer," Craig.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-88908129613271750242012-06-09T05:49:38.156-07:002012-06-09T05:49:38.156-07:00Made me smile did this Craig, I hop everything tur...Made me smile did this Craig, I hop everything turns out okay for them. (Croak... I mean groan.) :DSteve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-38109893349128003012012-06-09T02:22:15.190-07:002012-06-09T02:22:15.190-07:00If only it was this easy!If only it was this easy!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-51727015369370986012012-06-09T02:00:51.037-07:002012-06-09T02:00:51.037-07:00"He wanted something more, but he wasn't ..."He wanted something more, but he wasn't sure what." Is this a "be careful what you wish for" parable? :) Very fun, Craig.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-52557278958598561002012-06-09T00:55:11.548-07:002012-06-09T00:55:11.548-07:00I really like the way this concentrates on the old...I really like the way this concentrates on the older brother character. He resonates well!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-37592437663280559732012-06-08T08:50:08.592-07:002012-06-08T08:50:08.592-07:00Thanks Mazzz!
It would make things interesting f...Thanks Mazzz! <br /><br />It would make things interesting for sure.Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-46856808977021831962012-06-08T08:49:33.696-07:002012-06-08T08:49:33.696-07:00thanks Leigh! Fixed.thanks Leigh! Fixed.Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-7870525175830588122012-06-08T05:32:25.996-07:002012-06-08T05:32:25.996-07:00Well, I'd happily date someone who said Ribbit...Well, I'd happily date someone who said Ribbit a lot. cute take on the original :-)mazzz_in_Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-68512622463532344542012-06-08T03:42:02.997-07:002012-06-08T03:42:02.997-07:00Also change 'her brother' to 'his brot...Also change 'her brother' to 'his brother' in first para?Leigh Andrewshttp://ramblinglitchi.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-56873782904385509862012-06-08T02:19:40.243-07:002012-06-08T02:19:40.243-07:00You should see her jump!
Well spotted Helen. Than...You should see her jump!<br /><br />Well spotted Helen. Thanks! Flows a lot better now.Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-67723004202455531022012-06-07T23:10:02.453-07:002012-06-07T23:10:02.453-07:00Well,she's a girl who's cheap to take out!...Well,she's a girl who's cheap to take out! LOL<br /><br />The first sentence jarred me a bit, I think you could leave out the first 'the party' and it would read smoother with 'Prince Jeremy wandered away from his younger and handsomer brother's engagement party.'Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.com