tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post1255628122551594373..comments2023-09-30T05:41:35.801-07:00Comments on The Fantasy/Reality World of a Writer: Thirty Eighth Friday Flash: The ClassroomCraig Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-49242964605791907342012-02-15T08:58:48.030-08:002012-02-15T08:58:48.030-08:00that's brilliant. i want to know more...that's brilliant. i want to know more...njsullivanhttp://www.seriously-single-absolutely-attached.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-80871525782617868292012-01-21T12:01:08.931-08:002012-01-21T12:01:08.931-08:00It seems he has one hell of an enduring crush on t...It seems he has one hell of an enduring crush on the lady, and he does seem quite a nice guy too, even though a little strange.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-12275781533957195252012-01-21T07:40:59.279-08:002012-01-21T07:40:59.279-08:00Good story! There are still plenty of questions as...Good story! There are still plenty of questions as the story ends, but that doesn't matter. It feels complete.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-15022675755168538302012-01-21T01:00:17.708-08:002012-01-21T01:00:17.708-08:00Very nice... surprised the teacher wasn't more...Very nice... surprised the teacher wasn't more freaked out.. that guy did come across a bit creepy... nice flash fiction:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-15882583459455269652012-01-20T21:15:05.962-08:002012-01-20T21:15:05.962-08:00I love how you build character in so few words. Ex...I love how you build character in so few words. Excellent!Kate Reedwood and Felicity Kateshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17613069966479619131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-37410142209352970202012-01-20T21:14:39.820-08:002012-01-20T21:14:39.820-08:00I love how you build character in so few words. Ex...I love how you build character in so few words. Excellent!Kate Reedwood and Felicity Kateshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17613069966479619131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-43225817271467113512012-01-20T17:52:31.019-08:002012-01-20T17:52:31.019-08:00Why does he need a nurse? Well locking her up is p...Why does he need a nurse? Well locking her up is probably too much!Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-56286614262170412802012-01-20T14:48:57.418-08:002012-01-20T14:48:57.418-08:00Impressive. A lot of feelings in very few words.
...Impressive. A lot of feelings in very few words.<br /><br />Hi Craig,nice to meet you.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-24602405447737611422012-01-20T10:40:16.814-08:002012-01-20T10:40:16.814-08:00Wow, surreal, cute and awkward all in a very short...Wow, surreal, cute and awkward all in a very short space. Is this a drabble, Craig? Even if it isn't, you accomplished a good deal in a short distance.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-27040093757669539242012-01-20T09:47:29.503-08:002012-01-20T09:47:29.503-08:00This was sweet without being sentimental and I lov...This was sweet without being sentimental and I love what you did with the line: 'Maybe it was all in his head?' Visual details, too, I could see him scuffing his slippers. Thanks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-7029444858114369442012-01-20T07:52:54.701-08:002012-01-20T07:52:54.701-08:00Excellent job of developing Melvin's character...Excellent job of developing Melvin's character in so few words! I have to feel sorry for the guy, she just won't warm up to him now, but locking the nurse in the bathroom might have been going a little too far. :-)Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-250861064970945708.post-11376703915750755282012-01-20T06:17:54.385-08:002012-01-20T06:17:54.385-08:00Very interesting flash piece. I really like how he...Very interesting flash piece. I really like how he escaped. There's also quite a bit of mystery about the piece. Well done. :)Cherie Reichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.com